Hmmmmm....wouldn't you know? I was thinking about using a Ceaser theme on my next piece? We've got something here. I think you did rather well on this. I must ask though, without sounding too critical, if you proof read your work? I noticed some little things in there. Still, I liked this. I think I'll put off mine for a while. Good job.

You rose to the challenge. Enjoyed the story line. Well done.

Wow, that was beautiful...

Nough' said. 5/5

mandy

How much this write touches me personally, reminds me of a few people described in this poem.
This hit home for me,Nik. And it is right on the mark. 5/5 indeed.

Great match to the story. Good job.

When I was done reading the poem I wasn't sure if I was going to give it a 5 or not to be honest. I thought it was pretty well done and unique but unlike your other pieces it lacks the knockout punch. I read it was a challenge and I'm glad you didn't back down haha 4.5 bumps up to 5/5 but I think we both know your heart wasn't in this piece :p

I woud agree with karl. this was good but it just didnt have the emotion you put into alot of your other stuff. but then great job on writing something like this for a contest. i just dont have that ability. if you told me to write a poem on ceaser i would spend an hour coming up with 3 sentences i hated