And I'm on the beach of the ocean in your eyes
The tide pulls me under your memories
And I'm drowning in your essence
But under the waves I still see a bit of light
I'm not getting lost at sea
Not without a fight, not this time
So silent screaming begs you to notice me
Before it's too late, save my life.
*You really need to read the title with the poem. I am thinking of replacing the first line with "And being near the ocean in your eyes". Also, I wonder if I should replace "silent" with "smothered" in the next to last line. Thoughts and suggestions are much appreciated:)
