Flowed perfectly. I also love how you used heart on my sleeve.

5/5

I can relate, broken hearts is just what binds us all. but I thought the way you wrote it brought out all your inner feelings, 5/5

I Can relate exactly... Again...
You made me cry, :')

Aww.. this is such a heartfelt poem... I can feel your suffering and pain through your words. Its really good. Great job!

"I guess It's true, when they say love is blind,
And I guess that's why, you left me behind,
This will be the last time, I put my heart on my sleeve,
Because you were the only one I thought I could believe. "

Really loved these lines, very impacting. to me it portrays a very blunt image of those initial and sometimes long lasting emotions and thoughts you have after being left in the dark by the ones you thought loved you. 5/5 =D

I could visualize your pain in this poem. You describe your emotions very well in this. Keep writing ;)