This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

Definately a nice and thoughtful write, when you love somebody you should always be there for them regardless. Nobody is perfect but 2 people together can be... Always capitalize I when its alone because its you. great job with this one I can relate big time.

The one flowed freely into my heart with heavenly metaphors and beautiful imagery and is now in my favorites

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Though others seem to say this flowed i have to disagree with them. Reading it, it was difficult to get the words out. It also seems in your work that you perfer repition, but as ive seen in another of your poems, it just doesnt work here. The ending was cliche, im sure you could of come up with something a tad better. Sorry for being so harsh. 3/5