Burning

Don't let anyone tell you who to be. Live your own life, and never give up. Moving on is a crucial part of life. Short poem, but full of emotion.

5/5. Keep up the good work!

I love it. This piece was short, simple, but very enjoyable and well written. I liked the way you started it, because I feel it sometimes, a lot of the times. Saying goodbye to this me, and starting over. But I'm too stubborn to actually change. lol

Love me like me hate me

I love this line. 5/5

Another very good write, I like this poem because many people feel the same way everyday and you managed to capture it in a very short and to the point poem. It is very well done.

I thought the idea of the poem and being who your are, just stripped down and raw is good, but i dont think the repition of the word burning worked that well, it seemed to repitious and didnt quite work. Also i thought the line about love me like hate me was sort of cliche. Overall it was still good. 4/5

Not only is this poem well written but it has a powerful theme that many of us could learn from to start fresh

well done
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