I want to dance with every heartbeat,
With strangers i meet on the road.

*I love this two lines :) This was such a unique poem and I think you did a wonderful job with it. I love the imagery as well. Keep it up sweetie. Nik*

I loved it! I feel the explosion you speak of many times... It is the artiste in us?

Sharing helps...I think!

Smiles...
Mari

I want to is something we have all felt in our lives, to break out of the same on thing and do something different. Well done.

I loved it. i understand how you feel. for me the wild woman in me is starting to crack through the discipline me and i dont know if i should just let her out. this was really a good poem.

Beautiful but so sad because with the words you used it's liked yor trapped and really want to be set free and to be set free you'd give anything. 5/5, Em