I think we all wonder if we are crazy or insane at some time in our lives. Those voices are usually you talking to yourself, trying to find answers. Well done.

This is a very deep and intense write. Your pain shows in every word. You have a long life ahead. Look for the golden ring and reach out and grab it. Happiness will find you.
~Hugs~

I think to an extent we're all a bit messed up and insane, that may be the one thing that makes us all human. I loved the uniqueness of this piece and the way you allowed us to enter your "messed up head" for a minute haha Great work 5/5

Deep. Very Deep.

The presentation is very original. Though this one is not likely to be a weekly contest winner, only because it resembles a cutting poem, I can appreciate the depth of pain shared and a literal skill in delivery
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I deffinately can relate to this. i think i may have to add it to my favorites. really creative how you used the ellipses.

the solitude, the voices, the insanity. nicely done

~Ben