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Brilliant write,
Short but with a lot of meaning.
Hope all goes well.

Keep up.

Andrew

Awh cute, simple but short and very touching. great job

I know the feeling, 5/5. Em

One demands two things of a poem. Firstly, it must be a well-made verbal object that does honor to the language in which it is written. Secondly, it must say something significant about a reality common to us all, but perceived from a unique perspective. What the poet says has never been said before, but, once he has said it, his readers recognize its validity for themselves."

Poetry Quote by W. H. Auden

I love this quote as it gets across what all good poets should be trying to achieve.

The poem though written by the poet only becomes a poem when the reader reads it and translates it in his mind to such.

Your poem though is not different as the same theme appears here daily, it is unique because your words make it so, they are what gives it, it uniqueness.

With the exceptions of those mistakes pointed out in the other comment this was an excellent effort and deserves a 5/5. Ray S

PS You must always edit to achieve as W. H. Auden says, to make it a well-made verbal object that does honour to the language in which it is written.

My on true love,
Yea I think its supposed to be ONE true love?
Great poem. I hope the whole trust issue thing clears up for you, I know I try to have trust not only in other people but in myself while in a relationship.
5/5