This was cute. Very short and simple. Gets right to the point. Not my favorite from you but still a good read. I enjoyed this one hun. Keep it up Nik :)

Reply this was cute but it felt kinda generic just there are so many similar to it you should personalize it in some way but yes it was good i agree short simple and to the point and very cute

Well I can see that you're currently having some issues with the word 'trust'. Looks like the relationship that you're in lacks of it but that the base that we need to have to start a relationship. This poems explores the confession of a one sided coin, what it needs is to understand the other side of the coin. I agree with Luna blue, it would be better if you were to put the apostrophes.

Btw just another thing to pint out:
My on true love,
^^^ i think you meant : My ONE true love.

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My on true love,
Yea I think its supposed to be ONE true love?
Great poem. I hope the whole trust issue thing clears up for you, I know I try to have trust not only in other people but in myself while in a relationship.
5/5

One demands two things of a poem. Firstly, it must be a well-made verbal object that does honor to the language in which it is written. Secondly, it must say something significant about a reality common to us all, but perceived from a unique perspective. What the poet says has never been said before, but, once he has said it, his readers recognize its validity for themselves."

Poetry Quote by W. H. Auden

I love this quote as it gets across what all good poets should be trying to achieve.

The poem though written by the poet only becomes a poem when the reader reads it and translates it in his mind to such.

Your poem though is not different as the same theme appears here daily, it is unique because your words make it so, they are what gives it, it uniqueness.

With the exceptions of those mistakes pointed out in the other comment this was an excellent effort and deserves a 5/5. Ray S

PS You must always edit to achieve as W. H. Auden says, to make it a well-made verbal object that does honour to the language in which it is written.

I know the feeling, 5/5. Em

Awh cute, simple but short and very touching. great job

Brilliant write,
Short but with a lot of meaning.
Hope all goes well.

Keep up.

Andrew