Cherish the Moment

by Second to None   Nov 10, 2009


One day I know for a fact that you will be gone
Until that day I'm going to spend all my time with you
Why be sad now when you could be living it up?
Why mope around before you need to

I'm going to keep up this spirit for now
Untill you leave and everything comes crashing down
I'm goning to stay a 10 until this is all gone and done
Forever is fake, one day you won't be here

Don't cry baby its not time to leave
Don't die baby its not worth the heart ache
One day we'll find this won't work out
Until then I will not scream nor with I shout

Lets hold on to this beam of light while we can
Lets stay together before forever ends
When that time comes I will understand
I'll try not to cry or think of when we held hands

I just need you to promise me this
Now and then you'll think of me
Ever so often you remeber our first kiss
And sometimes it will be me that you will miss

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  • 15 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    This poem is extremely heartfelt (especially since I know what its about lol)
    You did a great job and it flowed greatly
    Constructive Criticism=I think you should stay away from differentiating rhyming methods. It still flowed beautifully but it makes the poem harder to follow because the reader expects it to rhyme in the same style.
    5/5 Great Job