Comments : Cherish the Moment

  • 15 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    This poem is extremely heartfelt (especially since I know what its about lol)
    You did a great job and it flowed greatly
    Constructive Criticism=I think you should stay away from differentiating rhyming methods. It still flowed beautifully but it makes the poem harder to follow because the reader expects it to rhyme in the same style.
    5/5 Great Job