Wow! This reminds me of what I had to go trhough with my grandmother. This is a very deep and loving poem and I see a lot was put into it. 5/5

Oh my gosh! this is really a moving and emotional piece you did a great job i mean i can tell you put alot into it because of how powerful it aspires to be. great job 5/5

Little Long (actually very long) but excellent poem... Keep up this good work :D (5/5)

I like that you changed the style up a little bit here. I felt that you were very true to your heart and you didn't hold anything back. I love the imagery and the simple way you wrote this. A very flawless piece that was easy to read and relate to. Very powerful piece indeed. Always a pleasure to read your poems. You're a wonderful poet and your talent grows with every poem. Keep it up dear. Nik

Great job!! yu really captured the confusion and pain and love that is incorporated when death is on it's way. i would normally say that the style and the flow could hav been a little tighter, but to be honest this is one poem where you want things to look and feel scattered... bc the picture u painted here is. u may want to replace the word "heaven" with another word 4 it, but only bc when its repeated it takes away from the sweetness u portray. my fav line?
"I'll always be looking down from heaven
And you know that smile drives me crazy.

I always thought I'd have to die to see an angel.
I ended up living my life with one."

that was beautiful and very graceful, nicely done!! :D
Jescelle

I can relate with this a few times over. Weird but true. How is it i'm so young and can relate to adults so well? lmao
I really enjoyed it mostly because it was real. 5/5 Great Job

That was beautifully written yet filled with profound sadness...A little long yet you managed to capture my attention til the end..A very touching piece..indeed..

You may understand that I am curious as to what inspired this . I know of poets that write from an imaginative perspective Anyway the peom caused me to feel deep emotion It was no surprise how well it was written