Stupid feeling

by MysteryPrincess   Nov 11, 2009


It was a cold day of December
when my world starts to surrender
i cant hardly explain my feelings
it feels like I'm slowly dying
each morning of my day
was filled with emptiness and fantasies
Oh...how i wished you were mine
how I wish to stare at you from time to time
i don't know why I felt this way
since I lost you my world turn gray
i cant help myself crying while thinking of you
do I need to tell you "HOW MUCH I MISSED YOU?"
Yuh, I know it was wrong
begging for your love to come along
cause I know everything has changed on you
so...it's better to kept the word "I STILL LOVE YOU, GHA"

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  • 13 years ago

    by MysteryPrincess

    Thank you...for correcting

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    When my world start to surrender

    ^add an S so it reads when my world STARTS to surrender.

    i cant hardly explain my feeling

    ^add another S so it reads explain my FEELINGS

    since I lost you my world start to gray

    ^add TURN so it reads start to TURN gray.

    other than those small things you did a wonderful job describing how you miss Gha. keep up the good work. thanks for sharing.
    ~Ben

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