Comments : Stupid feeling

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    When my world start to surrender

    ^add an S so it reads when my world STARTS to surrender.

    i cant hardly explain my feeling

    ^add another S so it reads explain my FEELINGS

    since I lost you my world start to gray

    ^add TURN so it reads start to TURN gray.

    other than those small things you did a wonderful job describing how you miss Gha. keep up the good work. thanks for sharing.
    ~Ben

  • 13 years ago

    by MysteryPrincess

    Thank you...for correcting