Wow Joe!
What a very unique and intense piece you have penned. I truely enjoyed reading this piece.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy

Im not really sure what to think about it, i guess i didnt like the way it was set up or really the idea of it all. Though it flowed well and your word choice was great. 4/5

Wow... this is an extremely interesting poem... and I love the structure.. its different than most poems! I like it... I looove the line: "Revive me - and I shall revive you." I think its a very well-written poem and great job!

I find this poem very unique and original.I like the idea behind poem. How we wish, we could bring back those who has left us. But being mortals, we can only move on.

1986 - 2009 appears then slowly disappears on the charts.
^^^ I like how you phrase this, those people who has left us are only remembered temporarily, after that most just went back to their normal life.

I guess life does goes on.Nice choice of words that you have used for this poem. I truly enjoyed reading it.

Excellent Job Joe;)