The darkness takes me over
feeding on my heart
deep into the abiss witch i could not possibly

^^'abiss' should be 'abyss', 'witch' should be 'which'.

understand like a child in a fild of daisies

^^'fild' should be 'field'

walks into a viper pit
there is no way out
no way back once you've seen
the face of haties
and still deeper i fall
into nothing
what is this...this... THING
i know not of
for i am just a pawn
in the game of life
an d i will be silenced

^^'an d' should be 'and'

i will not act as if i can comprehen

^^'comprehen' ----> 'comprehend'

the madness in witch you speak of
'which' not 'witch'
i am not crazy just in disposed
and i have giving up

^^'giving' --> 'given'

Overall, this wasn't a bad write. I believe that if you take your time and concentrate on placing punctuation marks and correct the spelling/grammar, it could be much better. But you did a flawless job on the emotion.