by Lady Nik Nov 12, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I can't take this |
by SolemnWish
I really love that its a direct poem and its completely relatable sadly :( |
by fakesmile
Thank you so much for writing this poem! great concept! its simple and yet profound |
This one reflects your flare for delivering honest emotion at any cost |
by Faithless
I like how you open up your poem with your 1st stanza. I agree with what you're trying to say. 'I love you' has been overused too many times, sometimes even used as a trap to lure one to 'give in'.I must say that what i like the about this poem is that how you view it from a different perspective. Instead of having someone to shower you with beautiful words, you just want someone to tell u something ordinary, and that to you is special. I really enjoyed this poem very much. Keep it up |
by Cindy
Nik |