The flow was once again great and the imagery as well. The way you described everything was very detailed and erotic. But the last stanza makes the poem I think.... "While you sail my ocean with all hands on deck" definately a perfect way to word it. Excellent job 5/5

This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

Brilliant! loved this thought it was just brilliant

That was completly awesome! Love it keep it up!