by Melpomene Nov 13, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I once, |
by Nee
First of all, I'd like to say that the opening stanza was just beautiful, you did know how to catch attention. |
by HidinVictim
This is a good piece. I liked the originality and the word choice really sent the message home. I will say that the flow seemed a little off, and made it hard to read. still a good piece though.. keep it up! |