Love Sentence

by Mimed Lovette   Nov 13, 2009


Sentenced to death by her love,
she weeps silently.
The jury was him,
the one she adored relentlessly.

She pleads for mercy,
to be let off free.
His grim eyes stare past her,
this conviction agreed.

Pushed against her will,
to a place she'd forever lay.
One last look, last touch,
she tears herself into frays.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    Short yet sweet!
    I love this poem, no dought.
    keep up the good work, and dont stop writing.
    You have some real potential.
    :))
    If you could comment one of my four latest poems it would be appriciated.

    Btw:: im putting you in my favorites ;)
    -jessss.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Such a very sad write. Perhaps I am interpreting it wrong but it gives me the feeling that a relationship has ended. And the (she) in it begs to be set free, by meaning of ... she is not wrong (guilty) for loving and adoring the man she loves.

    Pushed against her will,
    to a place she'd forever lay.
    One last look, last touch,
    she tears herself into frays.
    ^^^
    Pushed against her will in this part gives me the feeling that she did not want the relationship to end and was pushed away to sadness ... the place she would forever lay.

    One last look, last touch ... gives me the feeling of him walking away leaving her alone ... and then she falls apart.

    Very interesting read ! Very much enjoyed

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    A truly wonderful piece about being judged by the one you love, 5/5. Em

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