Comments : Unheard Pleas

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is a truly sad piece I believe from the heart. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Moon

    I luv ur poem ... its really amaiizin the way you wrote it ... :)

  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    I liked this one, it was meaningful great job 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Very good poem. O liked it alot. It is so true
    what u say. the only one she can never stop
    from hurting her...was herself.

    Nice

  • 14 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I loved this poem. I usually don't like dialog in poems, but this worked reeeaally well. It was kind of creepy, which I really liked. It all flowed together really well. Rhyming was good. :] Great job with this.

    Cayce

  • 14 years ago

    by ReBecca

    Very haunting. Sad. I hate to see someone harm themselves in order to release pain held within. Great job. It spoke of your subject subtly without actually coming out and saying "cutting".

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great emotion...5/5