This was really good. I loved it.

The sadness is evident.

Thanks for writing this, i love it.

...beautiful, full of pain and reality. It's really a good one.

"beyond these words there is a real pain i feel"

Very, very touching.

Very beautiful words,I got goosebumps reading this.the emptiness and loneliness resonates throughout the poem, there's the visual sense of darkness cut by a dull red light and silent tears being cried, this is truly a soul-drenched poem.ethereal, beautiful, slightly maudlin, borderline morbidity, but the intricate beauty just adds that silver lined touch that saves the work from becoming too morbid.your mind, as I envision it in reading this work, must be like a dark vacant land cut by smouldering, heated emotions and entwined with soft, cold loneliness.I love it, the poem, entirely refreshing.