Hmm... Not sure what to say about it. I really like it but I don't know why. I guess it just reminds me of what I was going through. You should write more like this.

Soda <3

This I believe is a personal poem that lets out your true feelings of wishing your life away, we've all been there in times of despair. 5/5, Em

I wasnt quite sure what to make of this poem at first but I found after a second read it was the emotion that drew me in, this is an interesting write and i liked the format of the poem! Great job.