I don't know why, or perhaps I do, but I giggled a little while reading this. I read three times, and giggled three times. I'm not even sure I understood the real idea behind it, BUT! I liked it. Some interesting questions come to mind about the wold before us, and after. I guess that's the idea. I liked it. A very good write, for how I reacted to it. That says a lot from me.

"Was that too long ago for historians to annalize" Isn't that spelled analyze?
I extremely like the title by the way, perfect choice. A very good write, second or third only to Adam's Rib of yourself. 5/5

Good job i really liked it i mean even tho it never really answers it's own question it raises more in the minds of the readers good job!

I enjoy your poetry always, its very intelligent and truthful. The flow and imagery are well done as always no surprise their. I liked how you used similar words and similar sounding words in this piece it gave it a unique style. I guess it doesn't matter what we all believe when it comes to how the world started, we were never around for it. But I'm sure it'll matter when it all ends.... great job 5/5

I agree with the comment above. I've always enjoyed your poems. They always have something original about them that makes me want to keep reading. This time it was your title that drew me in and made me want to read this. A wonderfully crafted piece as always. Pleaseure to read :) Nik

Extremely interesting, very original. I love how you continue with the orignal concept, you don't strand off in some tyrant. My only recommendation would be to lengthen it one or two more stanzas, in order to express more in depth. Thank you

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)