by Sadespair Nov 16, 2009
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I Wish |
by Love Panda
I love this poem. So very strong at the end. Nice structure and word usage. Im not a fan of the double & but it works for you and therefor is good. Nicely done indeed. IBE |
by Kuro
You kept this short, but it was still beautiful. it's been awhile since you've posted something new. i liked the word choice. it really made this sound great. |