by Sylvia Nov 16, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
Let's pack up all our things, |
by Lady Nik
This wasn't my favorite from you, but it was still a nice piece. I do like the happy feeling that comes with it. It's hopeful and relaxing and more people should read this. It seems so carefree and I like that as well. Good job hun :) Nik |
by anand singh
In only a few words you've penned a beautiful verse my friend. |
Well done Sylvia what seems a simple poem holds a lot more meaning than at first glance. |
Beautiful! Simple and short, yet so sweet! I love it... I think everyone wishes to do what you've written about with the one they love... It's wonderful! |
The wording was a little flat to me. |