by Ingrid
Now that sounds like a pretty good suggestion to me! |
by Dreamofolwin
A wonderful write Sylvia! ... Full of joy and passion :) I just loved it, |
Ok Sylvia I'm ready to dance, but you'll have to teach me :-) loved the poem it was uplifting and just fun to read. |
One of your best, Sylvia. This write, if it insinuates anything, insinuates that one must have faith and take the first step. As MLK said, " You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step." |
Short but really well done Sylvia. Life is all about taking those chances, and one in specific, love. |
by Meena Krish
Sometimes we have to learn to take chances |
The wording was a little flat to me. |
Beautiful! Simple and short, yet so sweet! I love it... I think everyone wishes to do what you've written about with the one they love... It's wonderful! |
Well done Sylvia what seems a simple poem holds a lot more meaning than at first glance. |
by anand singh
In only a few words you've penned a beautiful verse my friend. |
by Lady Nik
This wasn't my favorite from you, but it was still a nice piece. I do like the happy feeling that comes with it. It's hopeful and relaxing and more people should read this. It seems so carefree and I like that as well. Good job hun :) Nik |