by BreathesToBleed Nov 17, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Laughs so cruel |
by Faithless
Nicely written, I love how you used the fun-fare as a theme to describe this evil person whom disguise as a clown. Though he enthralls children with his bright colored costume and sugary treats, unknowingly he also holds a hidden agenda to exploit the innocents. Overall I like how you penned this poem. |
by SheenaMarie
Mezmerising...very easy to lose yourself in the imagery..great job 5/5 |