Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

What Mercy is never shown said.!.
This sad poem is beautiful...
in a morbid kind of way..aha

Amazingly written. but I am fearful because your Info claims your poems are written from self experiences

This poem expressed such a deep, rough emotion. I was reading your poem and o could visiualize this scene and i can truly relate to this poem. Well done.

Wow....this poem was great.....I kept wanting to read.....i was lost in your poem.....that is really good....keep it up...dont give up. I've been to that dark dark place before

LOVED IT

Wow...extremely forceful and deep. I never get tired of reading about "depression or suicide" or whatever falls under thoughs catorgories. Well written except for a few miss spellers but hey...i got the point.lol. great job!

victoria

(plz...if u have time comment and rate mine)

Other than a few minor misspellings it was very good. I can relate to the feeling. I'm like victoria I always enjoy a 'depression or suicide' poem. You paint such a vivid picture with your writing it's like it's happening right in front of me.

I also found out while reading this, I can not listen to music and read and comprehend a poem at the same time.