Comments : Vulnerable

  • 15 years ago

    by fakesmile

    Awesome poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Mel, you know I am the biggest fan of your writing and ... this piece has touched me the most out of all your collection of masterpieces.

    I feel your words so deeply !

    So here I stand,
    distinguished by hope,
    holding on to
    what I believe you wont.
    ^^^
    Such a touching ending *wipes tear*

    Wonderfully penned hun
    ~hugs~

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    A very sad piece filled with so much emotion. Good job!

  • 15 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    It's very moving. I see myself with just reading this poem. Very nice writing.