Very well-written with great emotion behind each word.
Keep up the superb writing.
5/5

The flow is best in the beginning .. It starts to wean in quality towards the end . I really admire how you rhyme every two lines , it's not very easy to pull off . I also think you did well on this one , and your feelings are easy to understand . Really well done , 5/5

"A life with you is what I need.
To hold you in my arms is what I desire.
A love that will never cease,
Like the flames of an eternal fire. "
^^my fav stanza
I agree with Hollymariee as well; the beginning had very good flow, but once it got towards the end, it sort of faded. But I think that the emotioned evened it out. Overall, very good write. 5/5