Excellent poem, real good structure and i like the depth of the poem. language was also very good as it was more old stlye language rather than new and modern language.

well done xxx

Very powerful words again Adel. It has been a while and I always enjoy your work.

Adel
I have missed reading your verses. I hope all is well with you. As always your words reach in and grab the readers attentiuon. Very dark, deep and intense......wonderful imagery and word choices.
Excellent job!
Take care my friend
Cindy