by Mads Avnboeg Nov 20, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Driven by the horses of insanity |
by Mads Avnboeg
Thanks Kurt, I'll try to edit the poem. Always nice get critics, I sometimes stare myself blind at a poem, even after returning to it and don't see the errors ;-) |
by Kurt
Excellent choice of vocabulary. You used vivid imagery and this really enhanced the poetry. However, I found the flow to be rushed and out of beat. This was caused partly by the odd structuring of some of the sentences. |