Excellent choice of vocabulary. You used vivid imagery and this really enhanced the poetry. However, I found the flow to be rushed and out of beat. This was caused partly by the odd structuring of some of the sentences.

I.E:
"The time since we last have talked together"

Either eliminate last, or move it to after have. With it before have the flow is really thrown and causes the reader to stumble.

All in all this poem was well written and I enjoyed reading it. Well done.

Thanks Kurt, I'll try to edit the poem. Always nice get critics, I sometimes stare myself blind at a poem, even after returning to it and don't see the errors ;-)