It's awful when someone realizes that that person he or she loves just doesn't care about them. I liked the way you wrote ''she said i love you but he didn't seem to hear'' When people are blinded by hate, or doubt, they just don't care, they walk away, move on....but eventually go back and regret the fact that they left, that it was their fault.
Good poem. Really liked it a lot
5/5
Take care