Comments : The Maiden

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I once made a word challenge poem about Portugal, it had words like xenophobia and ostantatious and it was really difficult to make that into a nice poem, but I did and won, lol.

    This poem has a nice story, I have met many women like that on here, drama queeens, who think the world revolves around them..that is why I lost interest in most of them.

    Good job, Silvia, it must have really been hard to use so many words that were not your own chosing.

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    Wonderful job on the challenge....you left me laughing :) I wold never have attempted this...LOL
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    Beautiful and well penned.No challenge to big for your tallented mind.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Counterfeit laughter, terror filled the air,

    *Best line from the whole piece! Lol this was so funny and refreshing to read. I love that you used all 75 words, that's so creative. I liked that this flowed well. It wasn't all over the place or confusing. I think that's why I liked this piece so much. Very lovely piece :) Nik*