I would say that this is greekly funny, I like how you infuse the elements of God's love into this poem.But however i don't really get the divorce part, I guess you were just trying to make a some silly rhyme out of the whole poem but nonetheless i really did enjoy the poem. |
I think I may have read this somewhere in a thread on our club because I remember seeing it. Its pretty clever and I'm sure many people who have been in long relationships/marriages can relate. nicely done 5/5 |
by Nicko
Shory sweet and very clever as ever Mr Michael |
by Mr Rhee
I smiled. I laughed. I shook my head. This is a joke on all of us from the powers that be, and now, we can laugh back, thanks to you. Great work. |