Comments : May your Sky

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This sis such a beautiful piece hun. I found such lovely wording in here and it really soothes my heart. Very amazing piece :) Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Walah
    What a lovely poem. To be able to move on with such love still in your heart is wonderful. To forgive someone is actually the best gift you can give yourself. To be able to release the pain allows you to live.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is a turly, wonderful dedication to your first love, the first loves are always said to stay with us throughout time. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    What nice things to wish for a former love. Takes a person who has truly moved on to do this. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Simply beautiful....5/5<3

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    This is really sweet, I like the whole idea of you forgiving him and wish him all the best even though he had cause you so much pain before.

    My favorite lines are:

    It is better to have loved you and lost,
    Than never to have loved you, my dear.

    ^^^ I like how you express this, it's just full of sincerity. It's so true what you said, sometimes though things didn't worked out but at least you know , how it feels to once be loved by someone whom you love.

    I really enjoyed reading this poem.

    Excellent Job