Earth Angel
by Lady Nik Nov 23, 2009
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Too small to fly |
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15 years ago
I guess i liked the idea of the poem all but i didnt think that it flowed very well through out half of it, and some of the rhymes were off or didnt sound right, it was still a good piece though. 4/5
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15 years agoby mandy
A very emotional peice.
The beggining was very sad; but throughout the poem a warm humming feeling began to sink in, and when it ended, I was smiling!
Wonderful write! This poem made me feel alive! 5/5
mandy :) -
15 years ago
by kelleyana
Very well done and you use the title in a very creative way. 5/5, kel.
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15 years ago
by Cindy
Nik
Very nice job on the contest poem. I love where the title took you.
Earth angel
trapped in a dream
lend me your hand
listen as I sing.
I really loved this stanza. How many times do we feel like we are trapped in a dream. I liked the feeling of having someone with you to take your hand and lead you where you need to go,
~hugs~
Cindy -
15 years ago
Very well done Nik--this flowed just beautifully and your thoughts were vivid and could be felt easily. This doesn't surprise me coming from someone like you who does indeed have a big heart and is so caring. Awesome job, this was beautiful.
