Good job with this Nik. The flow is good and you did the song justice. Love the last two verses. Well done.

Very well done Nik--this flowed just beautifully and your thoughts were vivid and could be felt easily. This doesn't surprise me coming from someone like you who does indeed have a big heart and is so caring. Awesome job, this was beautiful.

Nik
Very nice job on the contest poem. I love where the title took you.

Earth angel
trapped in a dream
lend me your hand
listen as I sing.

I really loved this stanza. How many times do we feel like we are trapped in a dream. I liked the feeling of having someone with you to take your hand and lead you where you need to go,
~hugs~
Cindy

Very well done and you use the title in a very creative way. 5/5, kel.

A very emotional peice.

The beggining was very sad; but throughout the poem a warm humming feeling began to sink in, and when it ended, I was smiling!

Wonderful write! This poem made me feel alive! 5/5

mandy :)

I guess i liked the idea of the poem all but i didnt think that it flowed very well through out half of it, and some of the rhymes were off or didnt sound right, it was still a good piece though. 4/5