by gasping for air Jun 16, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
No tears from her eyes ever fell, |
I like it up until the bloody tear imagery...eh....but good job with it. |
very nicely written poem, Amanda. Keep up the good work |
What more can one person say but "I like this." I know "I love this." I dunno just like the poem. |