Comments : For Your Precious Love

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Kelleyana a good job with the song title side contest. The last two lines really sum up the way you should feel about the one you love. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Aww this was so adroable and from the heart. Lots of pure emotion and love spewed from your words. Good luck with the contest :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    I like it Kelleyana.. as i do with all ur poems..

    :)

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kel
    Great job on your contest poem :)

    and since you shared my life,
    things never seem the same.
    For your precious love,
    I'd walk to the end of the earth,
    to prove you what your love is worth.

    It's so nice to have someone to share your thoughts and dreams with. Someone just by being there makes you feel complete. I really loved these lines.
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Kelleyana,

    I would love to read this poem in French, I think it will be even more beautiful.

    Indeed this love for our special person can lift us all the way up to the sky, as you wrote down so well.

    You are a joy to read:)

    Je t'embrasse

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    A truly beautiful piece, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Absolutely beautiful. I like how you phrase every words and every lines.

    I'd walk to the end of the earth,
    to prove you what your love is worth.
    ^^ I just love how you express this.

    Excellent work. keep it up;)

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Great, great ,great poem.
    I really love how you phrase the lines in this poem :D
    keep up the good work 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem has unusually skillfully written free flow that I have come to expect from you

  • 14 years ago

    by january friend

    Reminds me a lot of a relationship i had with a guy. but i suppose quite a bit of relationships are like that, so may people can relate very closely to this poem. i really like the final two lines "I'd walk to the end of the earth, to prove you what your love is worth." a lot of people say these words, but sadly few mean them. great poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    I was very jealous reading this....all of it. it was superb,

    My mind seeks you every moment of the day"
    i think was the best line in the poem and in some cases wraps it up, but you still giving affectionate vocabulary. I Love this poem I only wish that I had written it

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel

    I really liked the ending. its an inspirational peice! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is truly a love poem that people could relate and appeal to. You give off such a beautiful and rhythmic vibe from the composition of this poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisitely Done Again. I do so Enjoy you.

  • 13 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    This is a really sweet poem i can feel how loving it is and know the feeling when you say you could walk to the end of the earth for it!
    very relatable well done!