I Still Love You.

by Courageous Dreamer   Nov 23, 2009


Time has melted my feelings,
morphing them back into
passionate desires and
love I cannot transform,
concrete in this heart of mine.

Your voice-- flamable,
one sweet word and my
emotions burst with love
permeating your heart a scent
that releases what I've been
wanting to tell you...

I still love you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    This is one of the most amazing poems I've ever read up here and I love it. So much. You practically spoke for my heart, words I doubt I'd have the capability to convey across. Wonderful job, 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... wow... beautiful! I love the description and how this short poem is filled with such deep emotions. Great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    How nice. Days, years pass by, and we still continue to love certain people. This write is not ashamed to say it out loud and face the truth. A 5 for me Temps, lovely.

  • 15 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    How nice. Days, years pass by, and we still continue to love certain people. This write is not ashamed to say it out loud and face the truth. A 5 for me Temps, lovely.

  • 15 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Wow! What a short but powerful and passionate piece of write! Short and sweet as honey. I love this because the first line gave the impression of feelings melting away; disintegrating with time - but the rest of the poem clarified that the feelings have been melted and reshaped into an even stronger love.
    I especially adore the idea of a voice being flammable. What great imagery and excellent word choices to describe intense adoration.

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