by Courageous Dreamer Nov 23, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Time has melted my feelings, |
This is one of the most amazing poems I've ever read up here and I love it. So much. You practically spoke for my heart, words I doubt I'd have the capability to convey across. Wonderful job, 5/5! |
Aww... wow... beautiful! I love the description and how this short poem is filled with such deep emotions. Great job! |
How nice. Days, years pass by, and we still continue to love certain people. This write is not ashamed to say it out loud and face the truth. A 5 for me Temps, lovely. |
How nice. Days, years pass by, and we still continue to love certain people. This write is not ashamed to say it out loud and face the truth. A 5 for me Temps, lovely. |
by silvershoes
Wow! What a short but powerful and passionate piece of write! Short and sweet as honey. I love this because the first line gave the impression of feelings melting away; disintegrating with time - but the rest of the poem clarified that the feelings have been melted and reshaped into an even stronger love. |