Its like a mini christmas without the presants, but you always enjoy the food and seeing everybody you know and love. Makes me thankful for many things, but mostly that I'm not a tukey haha perfect write for the time of year 5/5 |
I love Thanksgiving, but not only for the food, but the thanks that we say 'round the table. It makes you really think what Thanksgiving is for. Awesome. 5/5 |
by SolemnWish
I used to hate thanksgiving just because we had to pray before we ate sadly :( |
Great job it really fits how everyone i know looks at thanksgiving not really realizing everything bravo! |
by jescelle
Awww this is beautiful!!! You've really captured the essence of Thanksgiving, and what it is to be grateful for so many things. You're absolutely right too, people have been giving praise for their blessings long before Columbus, and it's a deep sense of joy that centuries have carried all the way down to all of us. Great rhythm, wonderful flow, and beautiful message. Keep writing, your very talented! 5/5! |
I thought it was a great poem about thanksgiving. The flow was immaculate and most of the rhyme was great. |