Ella y El (Him and Her)

by Sadespair   Nov 24, 2009


***This is my first attempt ever to write a Spanish poem***

No sabia que hacer
Ella traia su Sangre Caliente
Pero su seintimeintos en una flor
Nada mas pudo acer
Solo llorar, porque El se fue.
Con todo el dolor que ella siento
Las lagriamas se formo.
Ella a El Amaba
Pero El se muiro.
Ni pudo Ella decir adios
Si El rompio su corazon
Con los pedasos lo Amo
Con la alma lo Odio.

Translation.
She didn't know what to do.
She came with her blood hot.
But her emotions like flower
There was nothing she could do
Just cry over his departure
With all the pain she held
Her tears formed.
It was him she loved
But he died
She couldn't even say goodbye
He broke her heart
With the pieces she loved him
With her soul she hated him.

**It doesn't sound good in English, But at least you know how the story goes. thank you.**

Thank you, sadespair

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  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    I'm Puerto Rican. I understand more when i read. Great poem, it is really hard to write in a second language. I hate my spanish poems, they sound wierd. I wrote in Korean Once, i cant find the poem lol
    Great write i really liked it, Better in spanish then english 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Writing in a 2nd language (artistically) is one of the hardest things to do. i know. i did 3 Japanese Haiku's.

    i only wish i could hear it spoken, so i know how the words sounded. nice translation

    5/5
    ~Ben

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    Thats really cool writing in another language. could you translate it though :(

    as good as it might be, only those who understand it can appreciate it without a translation.

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