Thats really cool writing in another language. could you translate it though :(

as good as it might be, only those who understand it can appreciate it without a translation.

Writing in a 2nd language (artistically) is one of the hardest things to do. i know. i did 3 Japanese Haiku's.

i only wish i could hear it spoken, so i know how the words sounded. nice translation

5/5
~Ben

I'm Puerto Rican. I understand more when i read. Great poem, it is really hard to write in a second language. I hate my spanish poems, they sound wierd. I wrote in Korean Once, i cant find the poem lol
Great write i really liked it, Better in spanish then english 5/5