Wow.. thats what I felt with my past crush... but now, I found my new desire and that is my white teddy! :D

your poem was nice and there really is an emotion present there.. good work!

This was a really beautiful poem hun. Your words are so soft and sweet and make this poem flow so well. I love the imagery and the honesty as well. I'm glad I read this. Keep it up hun ;) Nik

Wow. brilliantly ended. as expected. 5/5
~Ben