A simple love

A very touching poem that is also very sweet. You had good flow and you kept me interested throughout

5/5

Amazingly written, I liked it alot.
+ thank you for your comment, as you've noticed, I'm still very young, but I have a strong feeling about writing poems! I see you are more used to writing poems than I am so if you have any good advice or if you have noticed a wrong piece in my poems, I would really appriciate it if you'd tell me.
So thank you alot. and keep writing!

Simply beautiful Grant , You always manage to bring a tear to my eye as I sit & read with a smile on my face .....I sure do miss our occaisonal chats & hope to hear from you soon ..... I love you my Friend ..........
Jim, The Man Within

A swing of heart.. maybe not a masterpiece but not even less!

The rhythm of this piece is so very prefect. Not sure if you intended to or not but each line has either a 7 or 8 syllable count (except for 1 line has 9) but I really think the 7-8 syllable count made this piece flow so beautifully.

Beautifully penned, loving words from the heart.
Touching read that I'm sure will make many readers say "Awwww how beautiful"