Comments : He Smiles

  • 14 years ago

    by Not Enough

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  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Sorry to hear about your friend __
    && This is beautiful.

    He'd be proud,
    If you can write this then,
    Stay strong and you'll be fine.
    The hardest part is accepting their death.

    If yu need to tlk,
    Let me know;
    I've been there all too many times b4.

    5/5
    x

  • 14 years ago

    by Death no Faith

    Good choice of words
    i really like how simple it is....

    keep writing!

  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Man. u make some sad ass poems but this world is sad itself 5/5