Very dark indeed.It's a sad reality that due to mankind's sins, we all have to dance with the grim reaper one day.Good job with this piece Sylvia.
Paul...

This was truly deep with emotions but overall very well done. Interesting to read something different & dark from you.

Short and creepy :) A very dark piece hun. I'm so glad to see people trying new things. I really enjoyed this poem a lot. Gave me chills. *hugs* Great work. Nik

Sylvia
A very dark and intense piece.

Ravaged by devastation, a soul is lost.
Final acceptance of darkness and death,
ghastly screams go unheard,
the grim reaper wins again.

Loved these lines. How many souls are lost and just lose hope. Wish more would fight to live. It's to easy to just accept the end.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Sylvia this poem seems different from poems i red from you. Yet as usual,whatever poems you wrote, i can feel emotions pours out. This is a sad write, but every emotions is a slice of life. Very well done, 5/5, kel.